Thrice - Dust Of Nations Tabs

(Intro)
This is just the little acoustic part, I was messing around and stumbled on what I
thought sounded pretty accurate. I was in standard, but I'm guessing the song is going
to be the same tuning as the rest of the album, not that you use the low E for this part anyway.

e|-----------------------------------|
B|--------13-------------------------| 
G|-0h9h10----10-9-10-9p0-9p0-9p0-9p0-| 
D|-----------------------------------| 
A|-----------------------------------| 
E|-----------------------------------| 
     

or

e|---------------------------------------|
B|--------13-----------------------------| 
G|-0h9h10----10-9-10-9-10-9-10-9-10-9-10-| 
D|---------------------------------------| 
A|---------------------------------------| 
E|---------------------------------------| 

tell me which one sounds better, or if they both fail.