Unsigned - Argenious-The Unnamed Tabs

This is a song i started to write on 9-19-03 after listening to alot of Shadows Fall and Killswitch Engage...i personally think its sounds like a metalcore song and might be catchy...you deicide, id like to see some comments on it once you try it out. Thanx
ALSO!: this is just the intro set right here...havent finished the rest. song structure at the end.

Riff 1
D|---------------------------
A|---------------------------
F|---------------------------  (x3 then do it with heavy distortion 3 times,then play again clean)
C|-----2-----3------1------0-
G|---2-----3------1------0---
C|-2-----3------1------0-----

Riff 2
D|-------------------------------
A|-------------------------------
F|------------------------------- (heavy dist, 4 times, then play riff one again)
C|-2-2-2--3-3-3--1-1-1--0-0-0----
G|-2-2-2--3-3-3--1-1-1--0-0-0----
C|-2-2-2--3-3-3--1-1-1--0-0-0----

Riff 3
D|------------------------
A|------------------------
F|------------------------(palm mute the whole thing 2 times)
C|------------------------
G|------------------------
C|-0-1-0-5-3--0-3-0-7-5---

Riff 4
D|-------------------------
A|-------------------------
F|------------------------- (3 times)
C|-------------------------
G|-0-1-0-5-3--0-3-0-7-5----
C|-0-1-0-5-3--0-3-0-7-5----

Song Structure
RIFF 1 X3
RIFF 2 X4
RIFF 1 X3
RIFF 3 X2
RIFF 4 X3
RIFF 3 X2