Vex Red - Untitled Tabs

I'll give this a go. Some of this may be the bass but it sounds ok.
Give me feedback. If this is really bad, dont blame me, im only 13!

Verse
e---------------------------------------------
B--------------------------2----2h3-----------
G--------------------------4------------------
D-4-----4---4----4--4--4---4--4-----4---------
A-2--0--2---0----2--0--2---2------------------
E--------------------------------------0------

e---------------------------------------------
B--------------------------2----2h3-----------
G----------------------4---4------------------
D-4--4--4---4----4--4--4---4---------4--------
A-2--0--2---0----2--0--2---2--3-----3---------
E---------------------------------------------

e------------------------------
B------------------------------
G-------------1---------1---0--
D-------------2-strum---2---2--
A-------------2-slowly------2--
E-------------0-------------0--

Im on fire....
e-----------------------------------------------
B---------------0---------------------------------------
G---------------1-----------1h2-1p0--0--1-----------
D-0h14-14//2----2--2-----2--2---2----2--2---------------
A-0h14-14//2----2--2--2--2--2---2----2--2---------------
E-0h12-12//0--0-0--0--0--0--0--------0--0---------------

Guitar 1
e-------------------------------------------------------------
B-------------------------------------------------------------
G-4--4--4--4--4--4--4--4--------------------------------------
D-4--4--4--4--4--4--4--4--7--7--7--7--2-----------------------
A-2--2--2--2--2--2--2--2--7--7--7--7--2-x16-------------------
E-------------------------5--5--5--5--0-----------------------

Guitar 2: after 2nd time
e-------------------------------------------------------------
B-------------------------------------------------------------
G----------7/6/7----------------------------------------------
D----------x/x/x-----------5/4/5-------2----------------------
A----------5/4/5-----------x/x/x-------2-x16------------------
E--------------------------3/2/3-------0----------------------

Alternate guitar 2:
e-------------------------------------------------------------
B-------------------------------------------------------------
G----------7/6/7------------------------7-7/9-----------------
D----------x/x/x------------------------x-x/x-----------------
A----------5/4/5------------------------5-5/7-----------------
E-------------------------------------------------------------

Breakdown:
e-------3~-------3~-------3~----------------------------------
B-------------------------------------------------------------
G-4--4-----4--4-----4--4-----4--------------------------------
D-4--4-----4--4-----4--4-----4--2-----------------------------
A-2--2-----2--2-----2--2-----2--2-----------------------------
E-------------------------------0-----------------------------