British India - This Dance Is Loaded Tabs

ok, this is a sweet song by Melbourne (i think) band British India.there arnt arny tabs 
this song so i though why not give it a go. so yeah, here it is.

this is my first tab so, yeah, tell me what you think, if theres any advce on changing it, thanks.

this dance is loaded
Theives (2008)
Drop D tuning
listen to the song for better timing and stuff


INTRO
after drums of course
add feed back aswell, etc.
then..
e---------------------------------------------------------|
b---------------------------------------------------------|
g---------------------------------------------------------|
d---------------------------------------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-|
D-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-| x4

VERSE (listen to song for timing)
e---------------------------|
b---------------------------|
g---------------------------|
d---------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-9/14-14-14-14-|
D-11-11-11-11-9/14-14-14-14-| x6

at teh end of the 3rd time through and on the 6th time through play random harmonics, i 
figure which ones though, probably around the 12th fret region.

CHORUS

e------------|
b------------|
g------------|
d------------|
a-11-9/14-14-|
D-11-9/14-14-|

FILL BIT...

e-------------------------------------------------------------|
b-------------------------------------------------------------|
g-------------------------------------------------------------|
d-------------------------------------------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-11--|
D-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-11--| x1

e---------------------------------------------|
b---------------------------------------------|
g---------------------------------------------|
d---------------------------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11^^-|
D-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11^^-| x1

play VERSE x4

then

e---------------------------------------------------------|
b---------------------------------------------------------|
g---------------------------------------------------------|
d---------------------------------------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-|
D-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-|  x4
pm . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

(slowly release palm muting)

CHORUS 2!!
(the solo riff thing)
e----------------------------|
b----------------------------|
g----------------------------|
d----------------------------|
a-11-9-7-9-7-9-7^^----9------|
D------------------11---9-10-| x4

then

e-------------------------------------------------------------|
b-------------------------------------------------------------|
g-------------------------------------------------------------|
d-------------------------------------------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-11--|
D-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-11--| x2

on the end of teh 2nd time play

e------|
b------|
g------|
d------|
a-11^^-
D------

BRIDGE

e-----------|
b-----------|
g-----------|
d-----------|
a-11---11^^-|
D-11--------| x2

e-------------|
b-------------|
g-------------|
d-11-----11^^-|
a-------------|
D-------------| x2

e---------------------------------------------------------|
b---------------------------------------------------------|
g---------------------------------------------------------|
d---------------------------------------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-|
D-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-|  x4
pm . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

(slowly release palm muting)

then stop!

ITS SO RARE THAT WE NEED SOMEBODY ELSE!
ITS SO RARE THAT WE NEED SOMEBODY ELSE!
ITS SO RARE THAT WE NEED SOMEBODY ELSE!
ITS SO RARE THAT WE NEED SOMEBODY ELSE!

e---------------------------------------------------------|
b---------------------------------------------------------|
g---------------------------------------------------------|
d---------------------------------------------------------|
a-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-|
D-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-11-14-11-14-11\9/11-| x4

e----------------------------|
b----------------------------|
g----------------------------|
d----------------------------|
a-11-9-7-9-7-9-7^^----9------|
D------------------11---9-10-| x4

e-----------------------------|
b-----------------------------|
g-----------------------------|
d-----------------------------|
a-----------------------------|
D-11\\\\\\\\\\\1///////////11-

e----
b----
g----
d----
a-11-
D-11- (strum until finish)


awesome and fairly easy to play

muck around with it

cheers