Jal - Humain Itna Pyar Na Karo Tabs

hamain it na pyar is a song with a very hip hop start.great tabbing by gohar.
this tabbing which i have done sounds exactly the same & is the best i could have done.
the tabs goes like this.
e\---2------\
B\---3------\
G\---4------\   (let it ring)
D\---4------\
A\---2------\
E\---2------\
hamain..........itna
e\--3-------\
B\--3-------\
G\--4-------\   (let it ring)
D\--5-------\
A\--5------\
E\--3-------\
pyar..............

e\---2------\
B\---2------\
G\---4------\   (let it ring)
D\---4------\
A\---2------\
E\---2------\
na karoo........

e\--3-------\
B\--3-------\
G\--4-------\   (let it ring)
D\--5-------\
A\--5------\
E\--3-------\
kay hum mar jayain

e\---2------\
B\---2------\
G\---4------\   (let it ring)
D\---4------\
A\---2------\
E\---2------\
hamain ....itna

e\--3-------\
B\--3-------\
G\--4-------\   (let it ring)
D\--5-------\
A\--5------\
E\--3-------\
tanha.....aaa.....na karo


e\--0-------\
B\--0-------\
G\--0-------\   (let ring)2X
D\--2-------\
A\--2------\
E\--0-------\

e\--2-------\
B\--2-------\
G\--2-------\   (let ring)
D\--4-------\
A\--4------\
E\--2-------\

e\--3-------\
B\--3-------\
G\--4-------\   (let it ring)
D\--5-------\
A\--5------\
E\--3-------\
kay gee na payain....
now comes the hiphop start

e\--x--x---x----x-----x-------------\
B\--x--x---x----x-----x-------------\
G\--x--x---x----x-----x-------------\   
D\--x--x---x----x-----x-------------\ (listen to the song for correct pattern)
A\--x--x---x-----x----x--------------\
E\--x--x---x-----x----x-------------\

e\---2----2------2-----2----------\ ..................1
B\---2----3------2-----3----------\
G\---4----4------4-----4----------\  2x (listen to the song for correct pattern)
D\---4----4------4-----4----------\
A\---2----2------2-----2----------\
E\---2----2------2-----2----------\

e\---3-x--3---x--3--x--3---x------\.............2
B\---3-x--3---x--3--x--3---x------\
G\---3-x--4---x--3--x--4---x------\  2x (listen to the song for correct pattern)
D\---5-x--5---x--5--x--5---x------\
A\---5-x--5---x--5--x--5---x------\
E\---3-x--3---x--3--x--3---x------\
repeat 1 & 2 on the same pattern
I guess u can figure it out now cause the whole song is based on these cords.
the players who know how to play "rangoon main" (unplugged ver. of jal) this will be a
piece of cake for them believe
me!!!
well i hope u guys are satisfied with it & i hope u'll enjoy it .
any confussions or mistakes plz reply me at my e-mail address.
hamoodrehman708@hotmail.com  ; )