Unsigned - Juvenile Plague - Done In A Day Bass

Position: Bassist

This tab is more or less a test tab for me as i'm trying out doing one of my own 
bands tabs. So tell me what you think of it in terms of tune etc.

Notes: / and \ is a slide where / is a slide moving towards the basses body and the
\ is moving towards the basses head...

Intro
G [---------------]
D [---------------]
A [---------------]
E [1/7--7\5--5\3--]

Additional Intro
G [----------------]
D [----------------]
A [----------------]
E [7-7-7-7-5-5-3-3-]

Verse
G [----------------]        G [----------------]
D [----------------]        D [----------------]
A [----------------]    or  A [22222222000-----]  
E [7777777755533333]        E [-----------33333]

Bridge
G [----------------------------------------------]
D [----------------------------------------------]
A [------5-5--------5-----------------7-7-10-10--]
E [2-2/5------2-2/5------2-2/5-7-7---------------]

Chorus
G [-----------------]     G [----------------]    G [----------------]
D [----7777\22255555]     D [----------------]    D [----------------]
A [5555-------------] or  A [5-5-------------] or A [5-5-----7777----]
E [-----------------]     E [----5-5-00003333]    E [----5-5-----3333]

Extended Part
G [--------]    G [--------]
D [55555555]    D [--------]
A [--------] or A [--------]
E [--------]    E [33333333]

Order
Guitar intro
Intro x 2
Additional Intro x 2
Verse x 8
Bridge x 2
Chorus x 4
Extended part x 1
Verse x 6
Bridge x 2
Chorus x 4
Extended part x 1
Guitar break
Intro x 2
Verse x 4
Chorus x 12 (end on a D note)

Tell me how you think this tab is ... hope you enjoy it and i hope you will enjoy listening to it by us in the future ...