Eminem - Rock Bottom Tabs

This is the all the guitar for the eminem song "rock bottom" Its perfect 
and not cr*ppy like the other one. listen to the track for 
timing. this is my first tab.  h=hammer on p=pull off 
~=let ring a little ~~=let ring longer (listen to the song)

e|11-10-11----11-10-11----11-10-11---------------------------
b|--------11~~--------12~~--------11h12p11-------------------
g|----------------------------------------13-11-10-11-10~~---
d|-----------------------------------------------------------
a|-----------------------------------------------------------
E|-----------------------------------------------------------

e|-----------------------------------------------------------
b|--------12-11~~11---------------------11~------------------
g|10-11-13---------13-11-13~~13-11-10-11---13~11-10----------
d|--------------------------------------------------13-12~/20
a|-----------------------------------------------------------
E|-----------------------------------------------------------