Eminem - Rock Bottom Tabs

This is the all the guitar for the eminem song "rock bottom" Its perfect 
and not crappy like the other one. listen to the track for 
timing. this is my first tab.  h=hammer on p=pull off 
~=let ring a little ~~=let ring longer (listen to the song)

e|11-10-11----11-10-11----11-10-11---------------------------
b|--------11~~--------12~~--------11h12p11-------------------
g|----------------------------------------13-11-10-11-10~~---
d|-----------------------------------------------------------
a|-----------------------------------------------------------
E|-----------------------------------------------------------

e|-----------------------------------------------------------
b|--------12-11~~11---------------------11~------------------
g|10-11-13---------13-11-13~~13-11-10-11---13~11-10----------
d|--------------------------------------------------13-12~/20
a|-----------------------------------------------------------
E|-----------------------------------------------------------