Violent Delight - All You Ever Do Tabs

It think this is rite, it sounds pretty kule. I tabbed this cos it rules an "jackoprichards" one realy suks. 
Intro
D|xx5xx5-8-------xx5xx5-8-101010-xx5-xx5-8
A|xx3xx3-6-666-xx3xx3-6-  8  8  8--xx3-xx3-6-666-33333-6666
D|------------666--------------------------------------666-33333-6666

Verse
D|-55-88------55-88------55-88----------------------
A|-33-66-66--33-66-66--33-66-66--33333-66666
D|---------66----------66----------66--33333-66666    X=Dead string (dont play)

Chorus
D|-8888-10 10 10 10-----------------8888-10101010----------
A|-6666- 8  8  8  8--6666-55-66--6666-----8 8 8 8-6-5-3-5   X2
D|---------------------6666-55-66----------------------6-5-3-5


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