The Crimson Armada - The Architect Tabs

Tuning: Drop C

Okay, so i figured its about time i finished my other tab...this is my transcription, 
rate and comment!! i put a lot of time into this and would appreciate feedback

Key:
. = palm mute
h = hammer on
p = pull off
X = deadened note

(0:00)-(0:13)
|---------------------------|
|---------------------------|
|---------------------------|
|---------------------------|X2
|-000-000-000---000-000-000-|
|-000-000-000---000-000-000-|
  ... ... ...   ... ... ...
(0:14)-(0:58)
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|X6
|-000-000-000---0000--0000--000-000-000---0000--0000-|
|-000-000-000---0000--0000--000-000-000---0000--0000-|
  ... ... ...   ....  ....  ... ... ...   ....  ....
(0:58)-(1:00)
|-----------|
|-----------|
|-----------|
|-----------|
|-00-00-000-|
|-00-00-000-|
  .. .. ...

(1:00-1:31)
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-8p5-8p5-8p5-7p4-7p4-7p4-10p7-10p7-10p7-8p5-8p5-8p5-12p8-12p8-12p8-|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|

|-------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------|x4
|-------------------------------------------------|
|-10p7-10p7-10p7-13p10-13p10-13p10-12p8-12p8-12p8-|
|-------------------------------------------------|

(1:31-2:02) tremelo picking
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|-12-10-8-7-4-7-5-1-|
|-------------------|

(2:02-2:17) let all notes ring out
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|X2
|-8---7-10---8-12---10-13---12-10-|
|---------------------------------|

(2:17-2:48) tremelo picking again
|------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------|
|-5--8-7--1--4--1--4--5--8--7--10--8--7--8-|
|------------------------------------------|

(2:48-3:00)
|----|
|----|
|----|
|-0~-|X4
|-0~-|
|-0~-|

(3:00-3:25) Breakdown! (yes it is quadruplets, i slowed it down and double checked) 
along these lines:
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|X8
|-0000--0000-0000--0000-0000-0000-|
|-0000--0000-0000--0000-0000-0000-|
  ....  .... ....  .... .... ....

(3:26-3:56)
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
|-8p5-8p5-8p5-7p4-7p4-7p4-10p7-10p7-10p7-8p5-8p5-8p5-12p8-12p8-12p8-|
|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
                
|-------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------| X4
|-------------------------------------------------|
|-10p7-10p7-10p7-13p10-13p10-13p10-12p8-12p8-12p8-|
|-------------------------------------------------|
 tremelo picking
|----------|
|----------|
|----------|
|----------|
|-10-8-7-8-|
|----------|

|------------|
|------------|
|------------|
|----------0-|
|-10-8-7-8-0-|
|----------0-|
           .
(3:56-3:58) silence

(3:58-4:08)
|------------|
|------------|
|---14-15-8--|
|---X--X--X--|X2
|-0-12-13-10-|
|-0----------|
  .
(4:08-4:34)
|---------------------|
|---------------------|
|-14------15----8-----|
|-X-------X-----X-----|X16
|-12------13----10----|
|----0000----00----00-|
     ....    ..    ..
(4:34-4:49) let all notes ring
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|
|---------------------------------|X2
|-8---7-10---8-12---10-13---12-10-|
|---------------------------------|

(4:49-5:24) Breakdown...same as intro
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------| play until end
|-000-000-000---0000--0000--000-000-000---0000--0000-|
|-000-000-000---0000--0000--000-000-000---0000--0000-|
  ... ... ...   ....  ....  ... ... ...   ....  ....