Red Jumpsuit Apparatus - Your Guardian Angel 1 Bass

I just ripped this from a chords tab, and changed it for a 5-string bass. It's my 
first "tab" so be nice, but do leave comments!

G|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------3-33333-3333|
E|1-11111-11-11-11111-11-1------------------------|------------------------6-66666-6666------------|
B|------------------------1-11111-11-11-11111-1-1-|3-33333-33-33-33-33-3333------------------------|

G|------------------------|------------------------||
D|------------------------|------------------------||
A|------------------------|------------------------||
E|1-11111-1111------------|------------6-66666-6666|| x4
B|------------1-11111-1111|3-33333-3333------------||

G|------------------------|------------------------||
D|------------------------|------------------------||
A|------------------------|------------------------||
E|1~~---------------------|------------6~~---------|| x2
B|------------1~~---------|3~~---------------------|| 

G|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------3-33333-3333|
E|1-11111-11-11-11111-11-1------------------------|------------------------6-66666-6666------------|
B|------------------------1-11111-11-11-11111-1-1-|3-33333-33-33-33-33-3333------------------------|

G|------------------------|------------------------||
D|------------------------|------------------------||
A|------------------------|------------------------||
E|1-11111-1111------------|------------6-66666-6666|| x2
B|------------1-11111-1111|3-33333-3333------------||

G|------------------------|------------------------||
D|------------------------|------------------------||
A|------------------------|------------------------||
E|1~~---------------------|------------6~~---------|| x2
B|------------1~~---------|3~~---------------------|| 

G|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------3-33333-3333|
E|1-11111-11-11-11111-11-1------------------------|------------------------6-66666-6666------------|
B|------------------------1-11111-11-11-11111-1-1-|3-33333-33-33-33-33-3333------------------------|

G|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------3-33333-3333|
E|1-11111-11-11-11111-11-1------------------------|------------------------6-6---6-6---------------|
B|------------------------1-11111-11-11-11111-1-1-|3-33333-33-33-33-33-3333------------------------|

G|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------3-33333-3333|
E|1-11111-11-11-11111-1111------------------------|------------------------6-66666-6666------------|
B|------------------------1-11111-11111-11111-1-1-|3-33333-33-33-33333-3333------------------------|

G|------------------------|------------------------||
D|------------------------|------------------------||
A|------------------------|------------------------||
E|1-11111-1111------------|------------6-66666-6666|| Until the end
B|------------1-11111-1111|3-33333-3333------------||