Mortal Treason - Best Case Scenario Tabs

Hey guys its Kush, This is my 1st tab so I hope you like it.
Im 14 and Ive been playing guitar for 5 years.
No one posted a tab for this so I decided to put one up.
Dont ask me if I got it somewhere cuz I thought it up.
Here it is.
Enjoy.

Tuning: Full Drop D
D
A
F
C
G
C

RHYTHM
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D|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
F|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|X4
G|---/12-\-----000--000--000--000--00000000----------------------------------|
C|--/-12--\----000--000--000--000--00000000----------------------------------|

LEAD
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|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|X9
|---/12-\------5--7--8--7--8--7--8--10--8--7--8--7--5------------------------|
|--/-12--\-------------------------------------------------------------------|

END
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Symbols:
/12\=Slide to that fret and back.
~~~~=Let note ring out.

I know this isnt 100% correct. But somone needed to post this sh*t. Give me feedback on 
tab. Keep it Brutal. Bye.