Electric Six - Gay Bar, Correct & Tabs

(Complete)
ok people, im submitting this tab because i feel the other tabs for the main riff or gay back are done a bit awkward, this way has a certain flow fell to it, its up and down and finishes on the note your going to start again on and the end bit sounds closer in my opinion to the actual song,

any how, this is one of my first tabs for sum reason ive refrained from tabbing out songs but im gonna try do as many as possible now, 

tell me what you think

E|----------------------------
B|----------------------------
G|----------------------------
D|-----3-5-3------------------
A|-5-5-------5-3-3-3---3-5----
E|-------------------5--------

E|----------------------------
B|----------------------------
G|----------------------------
D|-----3-5-3------------------
A|-5-5-------5-3-3-3---3-5----
E|-------------------5--------