Converge - Jane Doe Tabs

okay so i pretty much made a hybrid of James Bailey's tab, the guitar pro version, and 

Please comment and tell me how you like this version. I think the ending riff is better 
the ones on this site atm.

btw this is my first tab on here.

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| /  slide up
| \  slide down
| h  hammer-on
| p  pull-off
| ~  vibrato
| +  harmonic
| .  Mute note
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D  :-----------------|------------------|--------------------|
A  :-----------------|------------------|--------------------|
F  :--------6------\-|------6-----------|-----6-----7--------|
C  :0----------------|0-------------5---|0-------------------|
G  :0----/5----------|0--/5-------------|0-/5---5/6----------|
C  :0----------------|0---------3h4-----|0-------------------|
                   
D  :-------------------|----------------|----------------------------|
A  :-------------------|----------------|----------------------------|
F  :-------------------|--------8-------|-----------------3-3-3-3-3-3|
C  :--12-----7b--------|5-------8-x4----|5---0-0-0-0-0-0--2-2-2-2-2-2|
G  :-------------------|5-x13---6-------|5---0-0-0-0-0-0--1-1-1-1-1-1|
C  :8----8\4-----------|5---------------|5---0-0-0-0-0-0-------------|
                        |figure out strum|   . . . . . .
                              pattern

D  :--------------------------|--------------------|---------------------|
A  :--------------------------|--------------------|---------------------|
F  :------7--7----------8--7--|---------8--3-------|---3-3-3----3-3-3----|
C  :0--0--7--7--0--3--5-7--7--|0--3--5--7--3-------|2--2-2-2-2--2-2-2----|
G  :0--0--5--5--0--3--5-6--5--|0--3--5--6--1-------|2--1-1-1-2--1-1-1----|
C  :0--0--------0--3--5-------|0--3--5-------------|2--------2-----------|
    .  .        .                                   d  u d u d  u d u
D  :----------------|
A  :----------------|
F  :----------------|
C  :2/3-------------|
G  :2/3-------------|
C  :2/3-------------|

D  :----------------|----------------|---------6----|--------|
A  :----------------|----------------|---------6----|--------|
F  :----------------|-----8---3------|---------8-x6-|--------|
C  :2/3-3-3/5-------|-5---8---3---3--|-0-------8----|-0--0-0-|
G  :2/3-3-3/5-------|-5---6---1---3--|-0-------6----|-0--0-0-|
C  :2/3-3-3/5-------|-5-----------3--|-0------------|-0--0-0-|
                      |___________|                   .  . .
                    figure strum ptrn

ending @ approx 6:30

D  :---------------------|
A  :---------------------|
F  :---------8-8-8-8-8-8-|
C  :-0-------7-7-7-7-7-7-| repeat, slowing down each time
G  :-0-------6-6-6-6-6-6-| until you get to the epicness..
C  :-0-------------------|

D  :-------------------------|-------------------------------------|
A  :-------------------------|------------3-------------6p3-3------|
F  :-----7-7---------7-7-----|----------3---3------2p0------5b-----|
C  :---------0-----------0---|--------0-------0--------------------|
G  :--8-------8---8----------|-------------------------------------|
C  :8-----------8------------|-8\4--4-----------4------------------|

D  :--------------------|----------------------------|------------------|
A  :--------3-----------|----------------------------|------------------|
F  :r5-p3-3-3-3-3-3-----|-----------<5>--------------|------------------|
C  :----------7-3-3h5-0-|-----0---x-<5>-x------------|5-5-5-5-5-5-------|
G  :------------------0-|-----0---x-----x-<5>--------|5-5-5-5-5-5-x2----|
C  :------------------0-|--2b-0---x-----x-<5>--------|5-5-5-5-5-5-------|
                                     +     +
                                    harmonics
D  :------------------|
A  :------------------|
F  :------------------|
C  :1-1-1-1-1-1-------|
G  :1-1-1-1-1-1-x2----|
C  :1-1-1-1-1-1-------|

*updated thurs sept 11 08.
-added new parts and updated certain sections for more accurate sound