Before The Dawn - Deadsong Tabs

"(Intro)
Hey guys this is my first tab, i tried my best. 

This is the Intro and First verse. 

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|--3-5-3-2---------------------------|
A|--3-5-3-2---------------------------|
D|--3-5-3-2---------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|-------------------------18---------|
D|---------18--16-----16-18--18-------|(x3)
A|-19-19-19--19--19-18----------------|
D|------------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|---------19-------------------------|
G|-16-16-16--16-16--------20----------|
D|----------------16-16-16----18------|
A|--------------------------19--19----|
D|------------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|-------------------------18---------|
D|---------18--16-----16-18--18-------|(x3)
A|-19-19-19--19--19-18----------------|
D|------------------------------------|


E|------------------------------------|
B|---------19-------------------------|
G|-16-16-16--16-16--------20----------|
D|----------------16-16-16----18------|
A|--------------------------19--19----|
D|------------------------------------|
VERSE 1- 
E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------|(x2)
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|---11-14-13-14----------------------|
A|------------------------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|---11-14-13-14----------------------|      the container of my soul
A|------------------------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------| (x2)     Was severed from my
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|      Shell...
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----------16-----------------------| (x2)
A|---14-16-14--14-16-14---------------|
D|-16---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------|(x2)    At Birth i was
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------| (x2)  Stigmatized...
D|---11-14-13-14----------------------|
A|------------------------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------| (x2)  By fires of   
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|      
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----------16-----------------------| (x2) hell..
A|---14-16-14--14-16-14---------------|
D|-16---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------| (x2) The hollow space
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------|
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------| (x2)  inside
D|---11-14-13-14----------------------|
A|------------------------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|---11-14-13-14----------------------| (x2) Is growing still  
A|------------------------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------| (x2)    Its going for the
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|      
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----------16-----------------------| (x2) Kill
A|---14-16-14--14-16-14---------------|
D|-16---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------| (x2) Beneath the 
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------|
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------| (x2)  Blood red sky
D|---11-14-13-14----------------------|
A|------------------------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|---11-14-13-14----------------------| (x2)   The song was born
A|------------------------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----11-12-11-----------------------| (x2)    The sky was bleeding
A|---14--------14---------------------|
D|-11---------------------------------|

E|------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------|      
G|------------------------------------|
D|-----------16-----------------------| (x2) When i sang her the dead song
A|---14-16-14--14-16-14---------------|
D|-16---------------------------------|
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