Avenged Sevenfold - Nightmare Bass

Hello!
First, I apologize for my English because I am Brazilian.
A while ago, I did this same song tablatures, Nightmare, the band Avenged Sevenfold, and 
realized that I failed a few times, but even so, all you gave me five stars.
Now, I made new Tabs and during this time, I managed to improve them successfully.
After seeing it, comment which one is better. Thanks, and again, excuse the English.

Intro

G|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-0~0000-----0~0000-----0~0000--000-000-000-000-000-000-000-000~~~-|

G|----------------------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------1~111-2~222-3~3334~~-|
D|-00000000000000~~~0000000000000---------------------|

Intro 2
Here, I only have guitar, continuing with D|-0-0-0-0-0|, and has no bass. Not to be left 
put a note sounding. Do as you see fit.

G|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-0~----------------------------------------------------------3/12-|

Verse

G|------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------| 2x
D|-3~-0--000000-3~-0--000000-3~-0--000000-6353-5303-6353-5303-|

Pre-Chorus

G|---------------------------------------------------------------| |--------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------| |--------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------| 2x |-----------------------|
D|---3~-000-3-00-3-00-3-00-303-00-3-00-3-0-6353-5303-6353-5303---| |---6353-5303-6353-5303----|

Chorus

G|---------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------|
A|-----3~~-----1~~-----3~530-----1~~-000000000-|
D|-0~~-----3~~-----0~~-------3~~---------------|

Pos-Chorus

G|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-0~----------------------------------------------------------3/12-|

Verse 2

G|----------------------------------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------------------------------|
A|----------------------------------------------------------------| 2x
D|-3~-0--000000-3~-0--000000-3~-0--000000-6353-5303-6353-5303-----|

Pre-Chorus

G|---------------------------------------------------------------| |--------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------| |--------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------| 2x |-----------------------|
D|---3~-000-3-00-3-00-3-00-303-00-3-00-3-0-6353-5303-6353-5303---| |---6353-5303-6353-5303----|

Chorus 2

G|-----------------------------------|	  |-----------|
D|-----------------------------------|	  |-----------|
A|-----3~~-----1~~-----3~530-----1~~-| 2x |000000000-|
D|-0~~-----3~~-----0~~-------3~~-----|	  |-----------|

Ponte

G|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------------------------------1~111-2~222-3~333-4~-|
D|------0~----------0000000000000000~-------------000000000000000-------------|


G|---------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------------------------------------1111-2222-3333-4444-| 2X
D|-0--0030-0-0030-003~-0--0030-0-0030-003~-0--0030-0-0030-003~---------------------|

Ponte 2
Different from "0", the letter "O" when you tighten the rope tighter.

G|--------------------------------------------------| _ |-------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------| _ |-------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------------| 3x |-11111111111111-2~|
D|-O~-000-O-00-O-00-O-00-O0O-00-O-00-O0O-00-O-00-O0-| _ |-------------------|

G|--------------------------------------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------------| 3x
D|-O~-000-O-00-O-00-O-00-O0O-00-O-00-O0O-00-O-00-O0-|

Ponte 3

G|----------------------------------|
D|------------------------------4-0-|
A|-1-111-111-111-113-333-333-33-----|
D|----------------------------------|

G|----------------------------------|
D|---------------------------7-5-2--|
A|-1-111-111-111-113-333-333--------|
D|----------------------------------|

G|----------------------------------|
D|------------------------------4-0-|
A|-1-111-111-111-113-333-333-33-----|
D|----------------------------------|

G|------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------|
A|-1-111-111-111-113-333-334444444444444444-|
D|------------------------------------------|

Pre-Chorus

G|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-0~----------------------------------------------------------3/12-|

Chorus 2

G|-----------------------------------|
D|-----------------------------------|
A|-----3~~-----1~~-----3~530-----1~~-|
D|-0~~-----3~~-----0~~-------3~~-----|

G|--------------------------------------| _ _|-----------|
D|-------------------0530~~-------------| _ _|-----------|
A|-----3~~530---1~~--------3~530----1~~-| 2x |-000000000-|
D|-0~~-------3~~----------------3~~-----| _ _|-----------|

{Rafael Calazans